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Name: - Amarok Doubt (Usually goes by Doubt)

Age:- 30... Or he would be 30 if he hadn't died years before...

Gender: - Male

Skills: Magic: Before his death, Doubt could use no magic whatsoever, but after dying, and becoming a Draugr, Doubt can use magic in several ways. He can enter the dreams of living beings, control the weather to some extant (not much - only a light rain), and change into a few different shapes (seal, and occasionally a cat - which takes a good deal of energy out of him. There is no other magic that Doubt can do other than these, and using these to attack others does him little good.


Dark Insanity: Doubt can drive animals mad just by being near them, and he can also do the same to weak minded people. Those with strong minds are usually fine, and left unaffected by this. This is not something that Doubt can really control. He can cause the chances of going insane to be higher or lower, but he can't switch this on or off.

Size changing: Doubt is able to change his size, and weight in a moment's notice, although he rarely does this as it tires him out rather quickly. Changing sizes can leave Doubt vulnerable for a few seconds, but enough time for someone to cut off his head.

Blood drinking/ Flesh devouring: The way Doubt usually kills is by drinking the blood of his enemy, or by devouring their flesh. Doubt is not like a normal Draugr, and only likes the taste of human blood, and only humans that have something to do with his past.

Changing to Smoke: Doubt is able to change to smoke, and travel quickly, going through stone if he has to. This tires Doubt quickly, leaving him unable to attack when he has reached his destination. Although there is no limit to how many times he can do this in a day - or night - it exhausts enough so that he uses it only when absolutely necessary.


Race: - Draugr (look up on Wikipedia for details)

Hair: - Black

Eyes: - His one remaining eye is blood-red

Home Village: - Who knows

Parents: - Birth parents - some say he killed them as a small child... All eight sets of adoptive parents were killed by him, though he still refuses to believe he killed them.

Siblings: - None. He killed them all.


Character Personality: As a human, Doubt had been the "perfect child." He always did as he was told, never complained about anything, and loved his parents more than anything else in the world (including all of the adopted/foster ones). Doubt loved them so much
that he was always afraid something bad would happen to him if they continued to live in the world. Every time he got to the point where he loved his parents more than anything in the world, they would die.
Naturally Doubt's sanity began to waver a little. After he had lost six sets of parents, Doubt began to really change. He was still the 'perfect child', but now a dark haunted look entered his eyes, which only got deeper as he aged. By the time Doubt became a Draugr, he trusted no one, and he showed that through his one remaining eye.
Doubt also became literally blood-thirsty, killing people for the sake of drinking only a little of their blood, only to decide he either didn't like it, or didn't want more than a mouthful. Doubt finally became very close to completely insane, and began attacking more than his accusers. There are times when doubt can think rationally, but that is rare. The more time Doubt spends as a Draugr, the more he loses his ability to think, and becomes more of a mindless killer, living to destroy, and devour others. His hellhound, Cerberus is the only one keeping him from losing the last thread of sanity that he has.

Character History: Amarok Doubt was born to two wonderful parents, in a home with several wonderful siblings. Doubt's parent's were very kind, and loving to all there children, and Doubt loved them more than anything. Naturally it was a shock when four year old Doubt woke up one morning to find them both dead, and blood covering his own hands. Many people blamed Doubt for their deaths, but it was so obvious that he loved them too much that he wasn't the killer... or so it seemed.

A year later Doubt was living in a new home, with new parents whom he loved dearly. Soon everyone had forgotten about the accusations against him, and Doubt was able to live peacefully... Until his sixth birthday that is. Doubt woke up that morning to find his hands covered in blood, and his adoptive parents dead on the floor. The accusations began again, but still Doubt had loved them so much that it had to be impossible for him to be the killer.

Over the next twelve years Doubt had seven more sets of adoptive parents. Every one of them died, and his hands were covered in blood every time. The last time someone claimed to see Doubt killing them. By that time Doubt was 18, so he just ran away to be alone. One day Doubt awoke to find his birth, and adoptive siblings standing over him. They killed him there, and sealed his dead body away...

Doubt still believed he was innocent, and felt he must get revenge. That night Doubt became a Draugr, and began hunting down everyone of his murderers. For eleven years Doubt hunted until he had killed every last sibling, and adopted sibling he had had, and their families. Next he began hunting those who accused him. No one would stand in the way of his revenge. Doubt has begun to wonder if he really did kill all of his parents. If so he knows why. He killed them to 'protect' them from the evil of the world.

Weapons: Magic

Likes: - All of his adopted parents who are now all dead

Dislikes: - All of his siblings - both adopted, and natural. Those who accused him of being a murderer

Weakness / Fear: - Daylight. Doubt can only move around in daylight if he is completely covered, or completely invisible. Attacking is impossible for him during the day. Doubt is afraid of hurting people who could have been his parents, or adopted parents, therefore he tries to avoid killing anyone over 50. (Unlike most undead, Draugr aren't supposed to have any problem with daylight... I changed that a little to weaken Doubt some)

Animal Companions: - Cerberus - a hellhound. Cerberus has thick black fur, and glowing red eyes. his appearance fills people with terror.

Character's Physical Description: Doubt is 6 feet tall, and broad shouldered. He wears a leather patch over his missing right eye. There is a scar across where his eye used to be. Doubt's skin is a dark blue, and stinks heavily with the stench of death and decay. Doubt appears to be about 19 as that was the age he was killed at. Doubt always wears heavy clothes in case he is not able to find someplace to hide during the daylight hours. Doubt's skin is also beginning to rot away, a little at a time.

Dreams for the Future: - To get revenge on all those who called him a murderer.

Reason for Dreams: - They are the ones that put him to death, and they are the reasons he became a Draugr.

Alignment/side: - None


Last edited by morwen on May 28th, 2011, 4:20 am, edited 2 times in total.

May 17th, 2011, 8:03 pm
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Post Re: Amarok Doubt
He sound like quite a good character. How did he die?

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Post Re: Amarok Doubt
Questions are best asked via pm. :)

Very good, morwen. I Accept. Have fun with him. :)

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Post Re: Amarok Doubt
Thanks DS4! BTW I'm doing great after getting my wisdom teeth out... The drugs wore off quickly - they had a very hard time getting me to fall asleep... Looks like out won't be out of commission after all =D

@ Imposter: First: As DS4 said, ask questions through PMs, and not in bios. Second: He was stabbed through the eye into the brain. That is just a gruesome detail I chose to leave out.

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May 19th, 2011, 2:19 am
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Post Re: Amarok Doubt
I think this will be one of those characters I try and follow :)

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May 20th, 2011, 5:00 pm
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Thanks! =)

I'm planning on Rp'ing him with Zylia - shadow versus undead =) I'm excited!

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Against Both: Zylia Amarok Doubt Melantha Elfrida: Burn the Past, and be Free of it--Else you will hinder your life, and torment you daily. Can you live with that?


May 20th, 2011, 5:02 pm
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Post Re: Amarok Doubt
I'm not particularly happy with the 'see into the future' ability you gave him. Everything else looks fine.

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Post Re: Amarok Doubt
I completely forgot about that! I have no problem with taking it away.

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Against Galbatorix: Renell and Random Freda Theron Ancell Anette Daris

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Against Neither: Ryuu, Luca, and Altair Kelci Eliora Rianata Calantha Atlanta the Assassin Unknown and Nameless Dzroginion Morena Morwen Terra the Nutty Squirrell: This is my nut... Oh look! There's another one! IT's MINE! Leave it alone!

Against Both: Zylia Amarok Doubt Melantha Elfrida: Burn the Past, and be Free of it--Else you will hinder your life, and torment you daily. Can you live with that?


May 23rd, 2011, 5:26 pm
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Post Re: Amarok Doubt
I have a question about his magical abilities; more specifically controlling the weather and changing into shapes. Just some details on those abilities would be appreciated... are the shapes animate? what are his limits of control over the weather? etc.

read through too fast first time through, sorry. :/

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Post Re: Amarok Doubt
According to Wikipedia Draugr can change into "a seal,[10][11] a great flayed bull, a grey horse with a broken back but no ears or tail, and a cat that would sit upon a sleeper's chest and grow steadily heavier until the victim suffocated."

For doubt I will say he can only turn into a seal, and occasionally a cat - which rakes a good deal of energy out of him.

for the weather... Wikipedia was no help so I will say that if there are clouds, then he can cause it to rain lightly. I don’t want him to be too powerful. He can't do anything else with weather.

Will that work? =)

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RP Characters:
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Against Varden: Astrdell and Bjorn Alan Cor and Zoe Wulfe

Against Neither: Ryuu, Luca, and Altair Kelci Eliora Rianata Calantha Atlanta the Assassin Unknown and Nameless Dzroginion Morena Morwen Terra the Nutty Squirrell: This is my nut... Oh look! There's another one! IT's MINE! Leave it alone!

Against Both: Zylia Amarok Doubt Melantha Elfrida: Burn the Past, and be Free of it--Else you will hinder your life, and torment you daily. Can you live with that?


May 24th, 2011, 4:53 pm
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Yep, that's fine, just add something like that in the appropriate section so your fellow RP'ers can reference it easily. :)

moved to 'accepted'

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Done. =D

Thanks bunches! I'm going to be using him pretty much immediately.


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